Some people think that money can buy all the happiness in life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples to support your answer.
There is a common opinion shared by certain people that money can guarantee happiness in life. However, before providing my own perspective on this phenomenon, it is necessary to consider the meaning of happiness for various people and whether money could help to achieve it.
On the one hand, those who think that money is the primary instrument for being happy have their own reasons for this. Generally speaking, these people consider happiness as abundance in the material sense of the word, which makes life prosperous and comfortable. For instance, constant accumulation of money in the form of saving it and having a steady income naturally raises confidence in the future and thus means wealth, stability, and, as a result, a happy life.
Conversely, a large category of people assert that a true happiness is beyond money that can hardly buy everything in life. This could be exemplified by the fact that such people find happiness in relationships and interaction with family or friends rather than in enjoying the material side of their lives. In addition, this viewpoint places a substantial emphasis on that money cannot buy health, and health is considered as one of the major elements of happiness.
To sum up the above considerations, I would say that money should be seen as an instrument of achieving only some of the facets of happiness, such as comfortable life and the ability to afford material things. However, money can hardly help people have genuine human relations, families or true friends, and this is why I think that money cannot buy all the happiness in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01879699248 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76716501425 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0650800637 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275235145916 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123991772862 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677219189532 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181819691329 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304726285506 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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