Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students. Why is physical education important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
Nowadays, education system mostly consists of theoretical tasks, so it requires to add some physical activity because of the obvious benefits it brings. In that case, PE subject at school could not only alter the chain of routine exercises but also develop temperaments and strengthen muscles of pupils.
Researchers support the data, that it would be more productive to study something if she does 45 minutes of sports per day. The reason for that is a blood acceleration in the body, thus the human brain gets more fresh air and resources for analyzing and exploring the knowledge. Pupils also learn how to play in different sports games, including team sports, which teaches teenagers communication skills.
It is also worth to notice, that a healthy lifestyle is not less important, especially for teenagers. In 21 century, the problem of a sedentary lifestyle and bad habits, namely smoking, internet entertainment and alcohol is ongoing to rise. Therefore, physical and mental health are exposed to risk to get sick. In that case, PE could keep pupils healthy and fit. Additionally, some sport forms the character. For instance, while athletes have a run, they suffer from thirst, but in the same tame, such personalities as willpower and an opportunity to overcome difficulties are improving.
In summary, PE during a short time could make the school day more efficient and it also useful for melancholic people to communicate with a team. In my point of view, PE is the necessary subject helps pupils to cut bad habits and enhance personal characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1640625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90833888304 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66015625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7359628745 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106731502801 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355270423033 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068297122491 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665721770098 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742679597008 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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