The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that upbringing new born infant is one of innate skills of parents. while I have to admit this perspective is accurate to somewhat extent, t still hold a notion that parents should undertake parenting courses due to myriad benefits of them.
On the one hand, some people think that taking care of children is innate skill as soon as nature of each individual. this is to say, parents can study experiences and skills from their parent or relatives even their neighbour since this experiences is censored over many generations, it gradually becomes customs of families and regions. However, besides benefits are brought by this experiences, we should consider about some negative impacts on upbringing method, such as some of them are out-of-date and no more effect. Moreover, cultural influences can make parent’s methods is too draconian for children to follow.
On the other hand, others who in favour of participating in parenting courses is the best way to guarantee the development of their children completely in their own justification. As a matter of fact, parenting courses are going to equip parents with necessary skills and general knowledges to help them deal with rasing their children. For instance, many first-time parents lack of knowledge as well as experiences in order to care for children. this courses will provide both proper instructions and scientific methods to educate children. Furthermore, it helps parent deal with troublesome teenagers who are misbehaving while going via adolescence and make tighten the bolt.
To recapitulate, despite the benefits of traditional upbringing measures, I am strongly convinced parents ought to combine more than one method to attain best results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33941605839 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91874299745 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6142169884 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286821392612 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106292866101 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622195332667 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161883466907 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684722355709 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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