In most universities students focus on specialized subjects, however some people believe that universities should encourage student to study a wide spectrum of subjects. To what extent you agree or disagree? Give your opinion
it is argued that most of graduate go for pursue specific major and pay attention on some subjects that they want to learn deeply. While I have to admit that perspective is accurate to a somewhat extent, I still hold a notion that learning a range of subject bring myriad value benefits for us is much more advantageous.
On the one hand, students should pursue specific major, which they prefer and pay attention on some specialized courses. First of all, focusing on one major makes students devoting themselves to that area and seek to become professionals. this I to say, spending time and effort in oder to research one specialized subject makes students extent their knowledge. this is reason why most of universities usually have a lot of majors. At the same time, when students learn their favourite subject, it makes they feel interesting and get higher achievement.
On the other hand, others who are in favour of learners should take many subjects have their own justification. As a matter of fact, taking part in more than one specialize subject helps students enhance their knowledge and skills. Particularly, knowing many things is very beneficial for students if they want to specialize in a subject. many subjects are very related in this world and each others, therefore they have to learn different things to broaden horizons. Moreover, taking part in variant courses helps students to make friends and know different types of people. give them more opportunities than other to practices muti-skills such as: teamwork, communication or presentation. Apart from this, studying a wide spectrum of subjects gives students many golden opportunities when they look for occupation. To specify, with wide knowledge, they can take place more position than other graduates who just focus on specialized subjects. And in some case, they can get more job at the same time and get well-paid.
To recapitulate, I am strongly convinced that despite the benefits of focusing on specialized subjects, students ought to study a wide spectrum of subjects. Simultaneously, it would be more prudent for them to combine both types in oder to attain the best results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15211267606 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8726318054 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3540972411 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.611111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224606621891 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774560593609 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726269671215 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144358116188 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645560246782 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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