The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given tables illustrate the sales of fairtrade-labelled two products namely coffee and bananas in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in 1999 and 2004. Fairtrade is understood a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

It can be clearly seen that the highest sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee was uk while that of bananas belonged to switzerland

The sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee in switzerland was highest standing at 3 million in 1999 while the opposite was true for sweden at 0.8 million. The second, the third and the fourth position belonged to Belgium, Denmark and uk respectively. The next five years, the first rank was the sales of uk which was 20 times as much as that of Sweden.

In terms of the sales of fairtrade-labelled bananas, the highest of sales belonged to switzerland at 15 million in 1999 and 47 million in 2004. Besides, in 1999, belgium was lowest sales at 0.6 million. The following 5 years this position belonged to Denmark at 0.9 million. The sales of Denmark and Sweden witnessed a slight reduction between 1999 and 2004.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: was the highest
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...lion in 2004. Besides, in 1999, belgium was lowest sales at 0.6 million. The following 5 y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, second, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12631578947 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17556459961 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6439440796 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184454078458 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872014215642 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731597847723 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134022346186 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024965741554 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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