Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to a ract more local people to visit these places?
these days, a lot of museums and historical sites seem to appeal mainly to tourists, rather than locals. this essay will discuss a number of plausible reasons why this occurring, and a number of possible ways to a ract more local people.
there may be a variety of factors contribu ng to the low numbers of local people visi ng museums and historical sites. Firstly, it is possible that most local people have already visited such places, and may already have signi cant knowledge of their own culture and history, and therefore do not feel the need to return to these places o en, or even at all.(1) therefore, the majority of people visi ng are mostly tourists. Furthermore, many local people probably prefer to spend their free me and holidays visi ng other areas outside of their hometown or country, because they are more interested in learning about other cultures and history, rather than their own.
Although it does seem to be a quite a di cult task a rac ng more locals to visit their own museums and historical sites, there are a number of solu ons that could encourage them to do so.(2) one possible solu on may be for local governments to con nually upgrade museums by rota ng artefacts and displays, in order to arouse more interest from locals. di erent exhibi ons could be displayed and promoted more o en, focusing on di erent themes, or aspects of the culture.(3) Secondly, governments could also encourage and fund annual trips for local school children to museums and historical sites. And lastly, free entry to such places for locals may also encourage more local visitors.
In conclusion, a rac ng local people to visit museums and historical sites in their area may be a di cult process, however, there are a number of ways that locals could be encouraged to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67721518987 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45040536657 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8771589307 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.222222222 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1111111111 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369058999082 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169440823678 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600075594639 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241721969237 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410089332086 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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