Advertising has become part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agued that adversiting is essential part of morden life, which has a negative influence in our life. While I have admit that perpective is accurate to a somewhat extent, I still hold a notion that this bring myriad value benefits for us is much more advantageous.
On the one hand, advertising has disadvantageous influence on our life, thanks to the proliferation of the internet and technology, advertising are more and more attractive and various. First of all, manufactures use advertising as equipment in order to exaggerate the quality their products. this is to say, using technology and computer software amend their products and fraud customs, who purchase this goods. At the same time, some people use advertisement for saling fake product by imposing consumer’s belief. Second, nowadays, there are many advertising have unsuitable content without censor. some violent contents bring negative for children, being impact easily because when children watch advertising, they can cover hazardous actions in this.
On the other hand, others who are in favour of promotion activities like advertising have their own justifications. As a matter of fact, advertising bring myriad benefits, this promote commerce. Particularly, advertising raises sales, penetrate market and develop national economic. advertising not only describes product but also give many meaning message for consumers for instance, so that there are many business use campaign for promoting the sales. Apart from this, advertising can approach consumer quickly more than anything else. To specify, comparison with flyers, this method is much more convenience and cost-effective by using social network. advertising helps consumer understanding about ingredients, new characteristics or purposes of product. A creative advertising can attract customs, manufactures can appreciate interaction of consumers. Last but not least, this makes competition between business, which produce and provide the same goods or services.
To recapitulate, I am strongly convinced that despite the negative influence of advertising, consumers ought to see this advantages. Simultaneously, advertising should be censor, making them more and more quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'admitted'.
Suggestion: admitted
...ive influence in our life. While I have admit that perpective is accurate to a somewh...
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Message: You used an adverb ('somewhat') instead an adjective, or a noun ('extent') instead of another adjective.
...ve admit that perpective is accurate to a somewhat extent, I still hold a notion that this bring ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... exaggerate the quality their products. this is to say, using technology and compute...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...roducts and fraud customs, who purchase this goods. At the same time, some people us...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...have unsuitable content without censor. some violent contents bring negative for chi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertising
...e market and develop national economic. advertising not only describes product but also giv...
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Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'campaigns'?
Suggestion: campaigns
...ce, so that there are many business use campaign for promoting the sales. Apart from thi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertising
...cost-effective by using social network. advertising helps consumer understanding about ingr...
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Message: Did you mean 'censored'?
Suggestion: censored
.... Simultaneously, advertising should be censor, making them more and more quality. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83231707317 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20725766197 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8170366955 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.684210526 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194637704167 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638134541299 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443969369121 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115538053144 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525906156455 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.