In the current scenario we could see a rise on the number of news artciles reporting criminal offences involving youngsters. Few suggest that the effective way to curb down this negative trend is to impart the art of parenting to every parents. I tend to agree with this view and this essay would argue how being a responsible mother or father is the utmost quality to upbring a child as a socially accepatable and a responsible person.
To begin with, these days most family has father and mother both working to earn their living. In this case most of thier time are being devoted to their professional life, thus, the time they spent with their children in the formative years is considerably less. As a result, there is lack of montioring and guidance from a parents side. Such kids due to wrong friendships and misguidance sometimes commit a crime. For example, a recent survey by The Times magazine suggest that when kids are monitored by their parents in their childhood life are being less prone to indulge in criminal activities in the later years.
It is an undeniable fact that children from a single-parent family or dysfunctional family are more vulnerable to external influences. This undesirable fate are many times due to irresponsible father or mother. Hence, it is the need of the hour to teach parents the importance of the parenthood. When people are aware about the consequences of not being a right parent, they will be detered to go in the wrong directions and focus more on thier younger ones growth. For instance, in UK parenting skills are being taught at schools itself and is insisted upon every parents to montior their children's activity.
In conclusion, it is completely true that an criminal activites caused by youths can be brought down to a significant level if the parents given training on parenting skills. This will not impart parent with relevant skills, it also enable the government to reduce the crime rate increase that are on account of young criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90615835777 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72528543621 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8068530339 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252965905408 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832063137516 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598093222182 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153946754181 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642605225494 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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