Hi Robert,
I am writing to inform you about the internet class on Financial statement analysis that I have found recently when I was browsing the net. I believe it will be helpful if we impart the training to our team members.
Firstly, I would like to brief you about the important features of the course. It is basically on the advance financial review and analysis with a guide on excel tools that will aid us in making work much easier and error-free. With respect to tenure and timing, the duration is for two weeks and it will be conducted between 4 pm to 6 pm every day including weekends. It costs, Rs 15,000/- per member.
Secondly, the benefits of using this course are immense as its primary focus is on imparting key skills to the analysts who work on the financials and teaching them various excel utilities, it will enable our analyst team including myself to focus more on key areas by performing detailed analytical procedures with the help of advanced excel functions. This will not only increase our skills but also improves the overall productivity of our team.
Finally, as I mentioned the advantages are obvious for employees as well as the organization would also be a direct beneficiary I humbly request you to bear half of the training fees and allow us two hours of time in the evening for the next couple of weeks.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Akilan PL
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to employees'.
Suggestion: obvious to employees
...ally, as I mentioned the advantages are obvious for employees as well as the organization would also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71084337349 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61138073937 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6326433903 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208947717541 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661031434205 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426279088813 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994045572436 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03226370027 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to employees'.
Suggestion: obvious to employees
...ally, as I mentioned the advantages are obvious for employees as well as the organization would also ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71084337349 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61138073937 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6326433903 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208947717541 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661031434205 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426279088813 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994045572436 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03226370027 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.