You work for a company. you have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.
Write a letter to your manager. in the letter:
Give details of the course
say how the course would be useful
explain how the company could help you do this course
Dear John,
I have recently gone through an advertisement published on the internet regarding a course for big data analytics which will be beneficial for us to succeed in our new project in market research.
The comprehensive study program covers all the aspects of big data analytics including leading software platforms such as “Tablu” and how to customize the environment in terms of the requirements. The course costs $1500 and it will be conducted on the internet.
As you already know, the company has recently formed data analytics division to perform market researches where I can utilize the knowledge to enhance the productivity of the division. On the other hand, I will be able to train my junior staff members as well.
I would be much obliged if you could arrange the course fee and the relaxation from the work to attend the study program.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03870967742 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8351590698 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0130929829 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253016968751 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100725477224 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581900806428 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119818721597 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571804300249 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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