Many people are dedicated to work and allocate less amount of time for their leisure. This essay argues that despite the fact that attending log hours of work may lead someone to be qualified for a promotion, I believe that there are more disadvantages as this would create an impact on a person's health.
The key advantage of working extended hours is that a worker can easily be nominated for career advancement. An employee who works more than eight hours per day is more likely to complete assign tasks quickly than others. Most employers would consider this as positive and may consider the employee for a promotion. For example, many organisations have defined their KPI (key performance indicator) systems to trace their employee's progress according to the task achievement and the time consumed for the work. However, working longer period without having proper rest is not recommended as it causes a major impact on people's health.
Working more than nine-to-five cases a huge impact on the working community. Many long hour workers do not get enough sleep, enough leisure time and do not eat healthy foods and as a result of these lapses, they become overloaded and stressed. Woking under pressure for a long time lead people to lose their good health. For example, many studies have confirmed that stress is one of the main reasons for most non-transmitted diseases such as diabetes and hypertension. Therefore this essay believes that working long hours make people unhealthy.
In conclusion, people can achieve career advancement by working long hours; However, I believe that this may lead to creating an unhealthy society through depletion of people's well-being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ges as this would create an impact on a persons health. The key advantage of working...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ases such as diabetes and hypertension. Therefore this essay believes that working long h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1496350365 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69084054443 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5449335898 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385808056136 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138334702265 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048242317244 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243067247647 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724600890393 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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