Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?
It is widely accepted that university-level higher studies is an important factor to succeed in a career. This essay argues that this requirement depends in terms of the area of the career and will discuss other factors that can make significant upliftment to the career.
It is beyond doubt that, attending university education and graduation is a mandatory requirement in terms of careers such as Doctor, Lawyer and lecturer. Meanwhile, when it comes to skilled trades such as electrician, carpenter and motor technician, it is not compulsory to hold a university degree whereas hard learnt experience or vocational training can make them successful in their career.
Nowadays, almost every vacancy advertisement have indicated that having professional certifications completed in addition to the university degree is an added advantage to be selected as an appropriate candidate for the vacancy. For example, in many countries, candidates who have qualified CIMA or Charted Accountancy will preferably be selected for the position among degree holders. One other important factor to select the career according to personal preference. More specifically, if someone has chosen accountancy even though the personal preference is IT considering the salary is the only factor, He/She will feel frustration means job satisfaction is a major factor in terms of a good career.
In conclusion, it is accepted that university education is important for some areas of a career whereas it is not a mandatory requirement for some other area. Professional qualification is an important factor to be successful in a career other than a university degree. Job satisfaction is also another major factor that creates a career more successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...a university degree whereas hard learnt experience or vocational training can make them su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48507462687 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23578681758 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5459752989 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31468371317 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128736563684 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454757781221 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197608097516 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450825695893 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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