Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
In the minds of some people, working out of passion is more significant than a salary. Nevertheless, others disagree with this standpoint; they believe that earned money is the most important thing. In this essay, I will present these two views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, doing what you love is essential. Firstly, finding a job you love greatly affects your emotions and feelings during your future work. When you do everything you like, you always work with joy and are satisfied with your work. Moreover, working with passion also gives you the opportunity to develop yourself since you always find new directions and are more creative with each project at work. Secondly, dedicating yourself to your passion helps you avoid frustration. You don’t consider it a job; it is a hobby that also helps you earn money. That is why, with passion and ambition, you feel less stressed and enjoy your life more.
On the other hand, everyone’s life depends mainly on money. For instance, when you earn a lot of money, you have extra money to save for your hobbies. Only when you have money can you buy the things you like and go where you want. Additionally, money helps you follow your dream because you use it to pay for courses that you haven’t taken. Although you can feel a lot of stress because you are not interested in that job, your emotions will be compensated by the time you spend with that money.
I personally think that even though payment can help you have a better life, being able to do and develop a job you enjoy can make it easier for you to improve yourself. Furthermore, hard work and creativity at work also help you get promotions and a higher salary. If you concentrate on office work in spite of a fine job and high salary, the time for yourself, your family, and your relationships is reduced because you spend a lot of time at work. Overwork makes people suffer from many physical and mental diseases.
In conclusion, it’s really essential for us to follow our passion. We should choose a job that suits us so that we don't regret our work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d choose a job that suits us so that we dont regret our work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65675675676 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44934212482 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52972972973 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6688639417 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234153471028 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832092392966 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520896936159 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126606945611 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538292073763 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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