Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, The society develop day by day, so advocate think that the responsibility of teenagers for volunteer work is compulsory in order to support those who are in need. However, in fact that have a plenty of issues,Which relate to negative effects such as time-consuming, accidents.This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
On the one hand , Of course, the disadvantages of volunteer work that the adolescents participate unpaid work .But It is not the main reasons. The vital cause is waste of the time. These activities is really useless, especially they have a high accidents rate when youths come to a far place or trouble road. That really dangerous for each person who do not knowledge of soft skill. Those surely make an impact on their life. Moreover, if all of them do not enough time in order to relax or take a rest , it will have numerous mental issues health such as stressful , worry , exhausted. Because they full of shuedle and rolling with society. Beside that, according to news in the internet which relate to make corrupt use of juveniles. For example, the celebrity recommend teens donate to needy children in the countryside. While , the essence is not real as they do not use the money for plan. They actually bring the benefit like dollar and fame.
Despite the negatives mentioned above,the positive of encouraging minors to help their citizens are more wonderful and significant. All most of them probably become better in personality and if they clearly seen the life of people with disability , they will indentify with them. From that point on , juniors recognize the hardship in order to understanding what they have is better than many people. Thenceforth, They try to have a useful life for society. Last but not least, the company and universities pay attention to volunteering in your profile. Therefore, you have the opportunity in order to get a great job.
In conclusion, while there are numerous drawbacks mandatory for adolescents take part in charity work such as wasting wonderful time, accidents and exploited, these are overcome the positives ,including better personality and increased chances of career. This is provide that universities and factory reduce the work for teenagers so that they have enough time to join unpaid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04591836735 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83678496697 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56887755102 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2568460841 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0492615274178 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016691277249 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303934139436 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0267295176992 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286596204339 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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