Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary
In this day and age, job’s payment is one of the topics which people pay much attention to. There is a school of thought that well-paying is far more essential than satisfaction. From my point of view, I totally agree with the job’s salary which will be discussed in the following paragraph.
There are several reasons why many people prefer to have a well-paying profession due to its benefits. From the perspective of interest, people suppose that high payment will boost our interest in working hard. It can not be argued that most people want to get a stable life in modern society, thus having a well-paid earning will encourage them to be more dedicated.For instance, some newspapers have shown that about 60% of graduates are tending to choose occupations by working hard for the aim of a good earning.
Secondly, enhancing the quality of life is the advantage which we have from this trend. It can not be argued that most people utilise this wage for educating their children and improving health care for their family. Taking the Asian family as an example, some needy families usually do their best in working for having a good-payment, thus it will improve their families' lives. As a result, it can be said that salary is much more vital than job pleasure .
Taking everything into consideration, it can not be denied that people prefer having an occupation with good pay. In my opinion, I suppose that good salaries can bring numerous benefits for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i suppose, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84920634921 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62814643456 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1171887973 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100434716876 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494752817365 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674322817633 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704782258858 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057834876954 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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