Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

even though in this catastrophic scenario, having hefty pay scales are considered greatly to live extravagant lifestyle.
however, in my opinion contentment from job is more valuable and which even could not be replaced by high amount of salaries. I will justify my view points in the the following paragraph with the supporting examples.
Undoubtedly, the major reason behind this saying is that the job satisfaction does not only motivate and inspire people to do and follow their passionate work with low pay scales, but it also provides a room to them to grow and flourish in their interested field. this is due to the fact that, any professional job obviously associated with many hardships which require infinity patients to keep moving forward. Resulting, the inner inspirational atmosphere would lead to a career development of an employee. Researchers from various fields and scientists are the epitome here. majority them spend their whole life to do the things which provides them an essence of happiness, though their work purpose is to become famous but not to be a Rich. Additionally, job satisfaction will help in providing enjoyment in life.Generally having mearly a big bank balance could not take a place of real sense of satisfaction until and unless individuals are not enjoying their current work. this is because that when an employee feels pleasured to do what they are doing for their jobs, it will bring powerful and positive energy as well for them, to accomplish their targets superiorioly. Therefore, heavy amounts of salaries could be served just as an attraction to an employee, hence these perks are unable to beat the happy feelings of workers by pursuing their best- loved work.

To conclude, balancing between salary and job satisfaction is better. however, I strongly believe that inspiring, motivating and promoting the career path of an employee should be kept on high place which comes under job satisfaction without any second thought.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17445482866 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85768794183 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2066461172 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146188816008 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053131363398 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554886173064 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778579090527 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537911250035 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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