Blood sports have been a part of human community, where people to have fun risk animals life. However, some sections of population believe that it is not a part of ideal society and should be banned. Withstanding, I extremely agree with this assertion.
To commence with, blood sports, in this contemporary era, are considered as uncivilized activity. But, still numerous nations have not made it illegale. It is morally and ethically wrong, as, all animals have right to enjoy their freedom. Any person should not be allowed to risk animals life merely for enjoyment or to make money. Creatures also feel pain like humams and equally share this earth. And, these people keep animals in hostile conditions, with improper diet and health check up. To illustrate, bulls used in fight are never diagnosed, moreover neither they are fed properly. Hence, these activities should be banned.
Moving further, these sports spread wrong message to future generation. When children watch these inhumane scenes, they are affected and eventually when they grow up their conduct become brutal towards wildlife. For instance, recent research have shown that behaviour of juveniles was kind towards animals in the countries, where blood sports was banned. At last, wildlife is imperative part of nature and if its balance is disturbed, it will have dire repercussion in response of cruel human activities. Deducing making blood sports out of law will only have positive impact.
In conclusion, as I aforementioned animals are vital part of society and using them for money does not seems to be right. Therefore, banning it is good decision and should be implemented as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20295202952 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6409890813 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.296477406 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29741366857 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819237753547 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659998615501 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171429061788 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256634570036 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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