Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
In recent years, how firms operate has become more controversial. Many people suppose that to increase profit, enterprises should do with every trick. However, I totally disagree with this argument. I think that besides doing profits these organizations should be responsible for other related fields such as the welfare and social aspects.
It is true that the main operating purpose of almost businesses is to create profits. However, managers should conduct their companies in socially responsible manners, which not only reduce the government’s burdens but also enhance their reputation. For example, each year, giant incorporations such as Unilever, Nestle have provided students in hard conditions with a number of scholarships and invested in building schooling facilities in removed areas. As a result, they either created studying opportunities for poor students or improve their public image. Of course, the businesses’ revenue increased considerably.
In terms of environmental issues, enterprises should take action to handle biological problems which are caused by their operation. It is obvious that serious environmental degradations are results of the reckless performance of these companies. For example, the polluted marine environment has been stemming from irresponsible oil extraction system of oil exploitation companies. In addition, unqualified disposal of industrial waste of factories is the main culprit of global warming. Therefore, businesses should use a part of the profit to install impeccable waste treatment systems and limit discharge chemical waste into the environment.
In conclusion, I do not support the idea that companies should make a profit at all costs. In my perspective, the kind of organization should be accountable for extreme problems related to their performance and other social ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83455882353 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23025802892 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654411764706 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0361407024 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190730118325 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602439413547 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689624929884 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120571235188 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607559495754 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.