Buying things on the internet, such asbooks, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era more and more people prefer to shop online instead of participating physically for shopping. This is a worthwhile development as it is comfortable and saves us a lot of time and hessel which is a prime advantage. However, purchasing a faulty product as well as getting cheated are the major disadvantage.
Due to the globalization, e-commerce is rising rapidly. Nowadays, citizens favor to order various goods such as books, airline tickets even groceries through websites avaliable on global network. This trend not only provide comfort but also saves us a lot of energy and time. As the traffic jam is a major concerns in affluent cities, travelling to shops may cause a hetric experience as well as a fortune of hours. To cite an instance, A well known dealing platrom named Daraz provide services to deliver all types of consumer goods within one to three days. Hence, customers can easliy purchase goods without any harassment and hesitation.
By contrast, buying things from internet may not always be pleasent. Furthermore, the internet contains many unauthorized sellers as ordering products from them may lead to fraud. In addition, sometimes consumers end up buying faulty items. This is a significant concern regarding this trend as one can not check the items personally. To cite an example, a article in the Daily Buggle claimed that the percentage of online fraud has increased to 45% in recent years. Buying from certified platforms will surely reduce these harassment.
In a nutshell, Buying goods through online network is getting more and more preferred now. Although it may result in frauds or other troubles, doing transiction from a certified website may minimize these concerns. Saving of time and energy in our daily lifes is the principal amneaties of this rising trend. It is needless to say that the pros far outweigh the cons of this development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'shop'.
Suggestion: shop
...cerns in affluent cities, travelling to shops may cause a hetric experience as well a...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e items personally. To cite an example, a article in the Daily Buggle claimed tha...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this harassment' or 'these harassments'?
Suggestion: this harassment; these harassments
... certified platforms will surely reduce these harassment. In a nutshell, Buying goods throug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09615384615 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80279252828 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61858974359 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2963626284 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201963373199 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053381754218 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572663770259 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119028431309 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377990347467 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.