(Cambridge IELTS 15)
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
These days, some people’s requirement such as having home is stated as an
issue . Regarding some cultures, It is vital that individuals have their
own residence rather than being renter. In my opinion, economical
motivations significantly cause people intend to buy their home. This might be
valuable in developing countries while seams there are few negative points too.
Economical intensives play an essential role in home purchase intention of people. One of the main reasons to have such motivation is “inflation” that people usually face with this matter obviously in developing countries. In this case, following increase of living costs, purchase power might be reduced and individuals would have more mental tension to overcome their financial issues. That is to say, investment such as buying home would be beneficial in order to maintain cash worth specially in countries by the high inflation. For instance, in Iran is announced more than 50% inflation through recent months this year. Hence , those who are tenant waist their cash enormously lead to high inflation.
There are several advantages of purchasing home instead of being tenant and also some disadvantages are stated. Mainly, when a family doesn’t have any special apprehension of having their own place to live, would be convenient and be able to manage all other economical maters. Further more they would have peace of mind to achieve more noticeable goals such as being progressive in their jobs, finally would be beneficial in economical society. Following to some, there are a few negative points which are controversial. Home ownership investment may confront people with cash follow and it would bring about flaw in economy. When this much cash spend on buying home, businesses would be rising down. Therefore, Country may be plunged into recession. Despite above descriptions of disadvantages results, individuals should better to be able buying their own home as their primary requirement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42443729904 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84462408921 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0574924628 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245168383399 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852485838023 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446780340608 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127047224343 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574469586605 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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