In this day and time, numerous towns in the world are facing problem of traffic congestion due to dramatic increment of car ownership over the past three decades. I think this notion is somehow true by observing the critical situation of traffic jam on the road. To address this problem, government should give permission to take immediate effective action and allure people towards public transportation.
21st century people are widely attracted towards materialism world in which willingness of own car is one of them. As a consequence, the demand of car is drastically increased in last few years due to which road cannot bear massive traffic jam by its limited capacity. Additionally, the competition between the merchants of multi-national company encourages people to buy car due to attractive schemes such as discount and payment on installment basis. Despite of familiar with problems of barriers in road, folks become ready to buy a car. For instance, the data of survey showed that, car ownership in cosmopolitan cities increased by 35% in this fiscal year.
This ever-growing problem cannot be easily eradicated by an individual. So, government should take responsibility to address the problem. It is necessary to develop comparatively widen road with distinct lanes for different purpose such as for cyclist and pedestrian users. Not only smart traffic signals but also alternative modes of vehicles with extra capacity should be applied practically. Furthermore, government should distributes licence to vehicle holders by examining the appropriate time which prompt to reduced a traffic. What's more, approval of vehicles should be given only on the basis of urgency by proper investigation by raising questionnaires like "Is any vehicles belong to him/her before applying for new one ?", such enquiries automatically helps to lower the rates of traffic.
In conclusion, although, car ownership creates excessive congestion but its benifits withdrawl its drawbacks by providing security and compensation on time to reach the destination.Also, government should take full responsibility and come with efficient and sustainable cure of the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'distribute'
Suggestion: distribute
...tically. Furthermore, government should distributes licence to vehicle holders by examining...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
Suggestion: traffic
...ppropriate time which prompt to reduced a traffic. Whats more, approval of vehicles shoul...
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...time which prompt to reduced a traffic. Whats more, approval of vehicles should be gi...
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Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...sation on time to reach the destination.Also, government should take full responsibi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54354354354 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16094275916 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9378529451 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.066666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293318454956 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097500895504 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674179580367 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169936462016 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083860902339 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.