car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’
how true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars
Most people would agree that the usage of own means of transport has increased in recent years, leading to a range of problems, particularly in built-up areas. It would appear a number of solutions to confine car usages issued from the government.
Perhaps the major factor here is the traffic congestion due to overuse of private cars. This means that too many people use the existing network, putting a strain on transport capacity, and the bottleneck is inevitable. For example, we see this in most large cities, such as Ho Chi Minh city, where is more than an hour and people are blowing the horns, thus worsening the situation.
Turning to possible solution, one of the best approaches governments should encourage and raise awareness about public transit and slower modes such as cycling and walking among citizens via publicity and public education. Secondly, a further step would be to use legislation to curb the usage of cars. For instance, Singapore is to cap these quantities on its streets and harder to approval from the state to buy new cars. Furthermore, government might fund itself through high taxes from parking users. This amount of money should be invested to improve public infrastructure capacity which incentive locals to absent private transport usage. Many cities around the world do this quite successfully and offer passengers bus transport into the center if they need it.
Overall, the key problem of relying on cars can be addressed through a combination of awareness, target legislation, and high parking fee. Clearly, these solutions should involve coordinated action by individuals and the state
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72414150811 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1001704315 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137127480922 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441780457701 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315920188514 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073609073299 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141887248634 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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