Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
There has been a surge in the purchase of personal vehicles in the past three decades. This phenomenon is caused by a reduction in the price of cars, and the consequence is that we are now faced with traffic jams on the roads of our major cities everyday. To solve this problem, government should dissuade people from using their cars and a number of measures can be used to achieve this purpose.
One way to discourage people from the use personal motors is to increase the number of buses in the public transportation network. The number of vehicles in use today are not enough, which is why so many passengers are stranded on their way to work. Forcing people to stop using their cars without addressing this problem will mean more chaos. However, government can assure the public that they won't be stranded if they decide to use public transport by providing extra buses to cater for all commuters.
Even with more buses, most people will shun public transports due to it high cost. Currently, it is cheaper to go to work with personal cars and most people question why they need to join the public buses with the current price of tickets. However, if the ticket prices are reduced considerably, those who use their cars will see reasons to park them and join public transport.
Another way to demoralize people from the use of their cars is by making it very expensive to run personal cars. In Lagos state for example, this was achieved through the introduction of toll gates and fees. Every automobile on the road was meant to pay a certain amount before they are allowed through the gates. Most individuals found it very expensive and stopped using their cars.
In conclusion, for every, filled bus, we have taken away twenty to thirty personal cars away from our roads. There is no doubt that as more and more people are encouraged to use the public transport, our roads will become freer from long queues of stationary vehicles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235772357724 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.189701897019 0.155533422707 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867208672087 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0379403794038 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0542005420054 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0542005420054 0.0403226058552 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42472129458 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0867208672087 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189701897019 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108401084011 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1945.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72058823529 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308823529412 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197058823529 0.28420135186 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.203846283523 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823529411765 0.137316102897 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42472129458 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 55.3642660288 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.25 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0538579054 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5625 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.814263465372 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 40.9558823529 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.46153846154 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313138182298 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117909304278 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816891175459 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56519063887 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112909203927 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131772311145 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551335289735 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34692822191 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0885024668668 0.0638462369009 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20786902238 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663131168785 0.058150111329 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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