As mass media is being circulated immensely in the society, it is also framing the viewpoints and notions of them. Showing appearance by media on celebrities’ life is far good for them in order to gaining popularity, but excessive showing about their personal could be against their fame. I largely agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are number of reasons why media attention is much valuable or worth for the celebrities. First and foremost, as celebrity decide to enter in any field gaining name and fame, they show their potential by their hardwork and extraordinary achievements. By doing so, media reports and headlines make them popular in the shortest period. Particulary, which support them to sustain their name in that field longer. Admittedly, showing and revealing interesting facts in the programs or events by covering their interviews or peronal experiences rather become as a sign of social icon, which is enough to make them excellent and exceptional.
As far as gaining name and fame by media attention is concerned, the issue of interference on their personal life also takes into the account. Intercepting their life by reporting personally which may not true or realistic. Having done this, they are devalued in the society badly which affect their career longer. When they are being defamed personally by some media persons, they supposed to take action against them in order to ratain their genuine image. As a result, the development of misconceptions in the mind of their loved ones or followers stops.
In conclusion, it is belived that media attention always stays with the celebrity’s life in the different phase of life. Although, media plays vital role in the life of celebrities to be popular, but presenting false reports on their personal life supposed to be under viewed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1711409396 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89752033142 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1531749239 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227265694853 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846069125085 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432695128643 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144426791703 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274785191974 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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