the chart below will show you the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

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the chart below will show you the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

House prices are alsways hot issues on over the world. Now, the chart below will show you the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
As we can see from the chart, during 1990 to 1995, percentage change in average house prices in five different cities are always decreased significantly, namely, NewYork with 5 percentage, Tokyo with 8 percentage and finally London with 8 percentage. Besides that, there was 2 cities rised inconsiderably that Marid ( Spain) and Frankfurt.
According to the enquiries, percentage from 1996 to 2002 average was sign of going up again. In general, four different cities, namely, NewYork, Marid, Tokyo, London increased remarkably while Frankfurt dropped. Specially, Tokyo which was the lowest percentage, hit a high with 12 percentage.
Conclusion, there is a difference between 5 countries around the world about percentage change in average house prices. House prices which depend on the number of population and their house demands.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37869822485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73995806357 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3818845572 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.59938729231 0.244688304435 245% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233572859323 0.084324248473 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.278703335092 0.0667982634062 417% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.393246125659 0.151304729494 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.287142136701 0.056905535591 505% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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