the chart shows something
The chart demonstrates the proportion of gender instructors across a range of educational systems in the UK in 2010.
From the graph, it is easy to perceive that there are lots of female teachers in three categories of school, namely Nursery/Pre-school, Primary school, and secondary school. Male teachers, in reverse, have a significant presence in groups of schools related to higher education, such as Private training institute and University.
Among six sorts of schools, females outnumbered males three times. Women made up a particularly large ratio of teachers in Primary school ( about 90% as opposed to 10% of men). Almost as many female teachers held teaching positions as male teachers in secondary school ( roughly 55% and 50%). The most overwhelming difference between men and women went on Nursery/Pre-school where there were approximately 100% female-dominated.
The figure became equally represented in the college. However, the advanced types of schools witnessed a higher number of male lecturers. In Private training institute, whereas men take up above half of the figure, under half of lecturers were women. Meanwhile, there were almost three times the number of female lecturers were outnumbered by male lecturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22270769313 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8323528471 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9090909091 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0178619941768 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00896874682902 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283616677371 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246640537798 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427193942672 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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