Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
After finishing high school education, students have to face the dilemma of whether to get a job or pursue higher education. While some people appreciate working straight after school, I would argue that continuing the studying journey is a wiser choice.
On the one hand, it is acknowledged that taking part in labour market right after high-school graduation is an appealing option. One reason is that young workers may progress quickly. Compared to other students of the same age, they will have more opportunities to gain real experience and practice their skills related to their chosen occupations. These are key factors that contribute to a successful career. Another invaluable advantage is that many youngsters want to start making money as soon as possible. Many students, especially the poor, cannot afford the high university tuition fee; therefore, working straight after school is the best and fastest way for them to make ends meet. The sooner they work, the more financially independent they become.
On the other hand, I hold a firm belief that there is an array of benefits stemming from getting a higher education. Firstly, it provides students with more chances to become professional employees with academic qualifications. For example, it is impossible to become a teacher, doctor or lawyer without possessing a university degree. As a result, graduates can access more high-salary job opportunities than those who do not attend the university. Secondly, the job market nowadays is becoming more and more competitive and fastidious. Young people who do not get trained in university or college seem to hardly compete with others and can be at risk of being made redundant.
In conclusion, working right after high school is a good option. However, from my perspective, pursuing higher education is a much worth-considering choice because of those aforementioned reasons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99054064231 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3206939703 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19678244788 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055127183282 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576120600831 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1156793466 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624690129913 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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