The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014.
some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events however other believe that they can learn news better through other media discuss the both views and give your opinion
The given pie charts illustrate, information about the percentage of volunteers who from six different organisations namely environmental, art, sport, health care, educational and other from 2008 to 2014.
In 2008, 21% of volunteers who from the environmental organisation and it increased by 8% in 2014. 50% of workers related to sports companies in 2008 and in 2014, it rose by one fourth. In health care organisation, where volunteers percentage was 7 and in 2014, it experienced by 8%.
Moving further towards details, that in 2008, in art organisations 18% volunteer related and it dropped out and 12% in 2014. in educational companies where volunteer work 24% and 17% respectively from 2008 to 2014. 50% volunteers from other companies in 2008 as well as it decreased by 6% in 2014.
Overall, it is evident that, the percentage of volunteers increased in environmental, health care, sports and educational organisations where as it decreased in art and other related organisations in given years.
It is believed by few individuals that, it is the decent way to read news and learn about the current affair through the newspapers whereas, others argue that, they can easily learn news better through other media. This essay will intend to analyse both the views along with my perspective.
On the one hand, there are some reason why people think newspaper are the best way to learn about the current affairs and events. The prominent one is that it is common and easier way as well as affordable. In other words, some individuals do not afford the electronic devices and they do not aware the latest technological gadgets so that is why they mostly give first preference two newspapers as compared to other media. To epitome, survey was conducted of Harvard University in 2003 that 65% individuals read newspaper all over the world. As a result, newspaper are the decent method for individuals to learn more easily about the current events.
On the other hand, some individuals farewell that social media is better method to learn about the current affairs. To explain it, because in this compatitive era, people do not have enough time for read newspapers, because they busy with their sedentery lifestyle. Through the social media they can get information in few moments. For instance, it is published in an article that, for the news and information, 90% people use social media. Hence, it is the fastest and easiest way to obtain and learn the news as well as current affairs.
To recapitulate, although, newspaper is common and ancient method of learn about the events.Yet, I believe that social media is equally important and valuable method nowadays, because, the individuals easily know about the current affairs through the media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09933774834 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86950414914 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437086092715 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1375933009 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482930895226 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136674566519 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097294038143 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20992021455 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709926644926 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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