Stress on the children mind create hindrance in their holistic growth. However, children undergo a lot of pressure in terms of academic, social and commercial aspects which has umpteen effects. This essay delineates causes along with solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.
The root cause of this trouble is that in today's world sending children to boarding school in vogue among society for blissful future where children study to compete with global students and they have a voluminous syllabus which leads to stress on their tender minds. Besides this, children confront society's pressure in different ways as people judge them from social status, clothes etcetera. For instance, children perplexed to western or traditional clothes as society want to confind in culture.
Furthermore, this problem is turning into menace due to fact that children suffer from commercial burden because children imitate the life style of celebrities which they watch in movies as well as suffer from bad peers so they pester their parents to buy costly thing and when they unable to get they feel despondent.
This is not an insurmountable problem as parents can spend time with their children and can support their children to notch the success in their life with positive manners. Moreover, society should provide freedom to develop various skills. However, teachers can teach the pupils - difference between right and wrong with the unbiased nature.
To contemperate all the points, it can be said that this problem cannot solved by an individual rather collective efforts can be highly effective to eradicate this problem from its roots. Government should implement rules and regulations for the society so that people cannot spoil the freedom of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3731884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55037735706 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5649095517 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236575626377 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846934538043 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603258997306 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133181666896 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451219795311 0.056905535591 79% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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