At this moment in time, children are experienced by some detrimental effects of academic, social and commercial perceptions. These circumstances prone them to get overwhelmed. from my point of you, and excessive pressure on youths and teenagers as well Will pervert them for the rest of their life.
First and for most, considerable amount of children are suffered by distractive behavior which comes from obsession. Indeed, they are forced to get compared by their families to act whatever they want. Regarding to this behavior, devastating their destiny and talent and also being stressed out stem from parent’s attitude. For instance, growing their children in order to resemble famous people would have ruined their life course. In addition to this, commercials perception distracts children’s belief. expanding this straight in order to take advantage of teenagers puts a strain on their individual targets.
For diminishing harmful effects of this issue, parents play a private role for them in which providing an extraordinary calm atmosphere to maintain their priorities without any comparing comments of their approaches is an integral action. Furthermore, knocking down the harsh impact of commercial is a must for them. Avoiding their attention to some of commercials which concentrates on drugs, alcohol and any other harmful things which are not eligible is a vital case. having a good sense of observation on their acts would have knocked down the degraded impact of outdoor happening.
Overall, it is a conspicuous situation that’s inconsiderate parents loom their children cannot have a suitable reaction on some challenging occurrence. despite the fact that government should provide a regulation which children are dominated completely by them, parents effect is more crucial to stimulate their brain and facilitate life course for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: From
...mstances prone them to get overwhelmed. from my point of you, and excessive pressure...
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...de. For instance, growing their children in order to resemble famous people would...
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Suggestion: Expanding
...perception distracts children’s belief. expanding this straight in order to take advantag...
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the commercials') or simply say ''some commercials''.
Suggestion: some of the commercials; some commercials
...t for them. Avoiding their attention to some of commercials which concentrates on drugs, alcohol an...
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Suggestion: Having
...which are not eligible is a vital case. having a good sense of observation on their ac...
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Suggestion: Despite
...eaction on some challenging occurrence. despite the fact that government should provide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54195804196 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95034666684 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0814896394 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101062075968 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393227199324 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325907394197 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738957612378 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529800071986 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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