Nowadays, people have to deal with several bad circumstances which recently exist in contemporary cities and as the time passes, they’re getting deteriorated and become more effective in the resident’s life. In this essay, both problems and solutions as well as go under the surface about each one will be noticed.
One of the most significant problem which occurs in modernized cities is about pollution. In addition, industrial features have a destructive impact specially on the air and also produce large amount of cars lead to increase air pollution. Consequently, they’re seriously threat subject’s health. On the other hand, lack of educational amenities as well as inadequate a wide range of job opportunities between youths give rise to increase thieves toward jobless. For instance, a teenager tends to stay in credit and be in a welfare. It stands to reason that if government doesn’t provide a suitable job, he will lean towards robbing and be subjected to miserable conditions.
One of the most prominent things that government should focus on is regulating about car manufacturing. Indeed, providing a well-done policy and hiring a sophisticated staffs lead car industry be more lawful. Also, citizens have to leg-up and contribute about this bad circumstances in order to restrict the air pollution by decrease the use of personal cars and tend to use public transportations. Furthermore, government should provide plenty of accessible educational centers as well as job opportunities to prevent youths doing thieve.
Overall, government has a principal impression about decreasing bad circumstances in majority of situations. Hiring a scholarship persons for accessing these conditions and try to restrict the bad effect of be in the skyscraper’s cities are so conspicuous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'staff'?
Suggestion: staff
...-done policy and hiring a sophisticated staffs lead car industry be more lawful. Also,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39497102948 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6098220927 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131677061943 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454382165475 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582848458404 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803161582955 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377031932507 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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