As children becomes adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.what are the main differences between young children's behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
In recent era, it is widely agreed that social behaviour of mankind is changing day-to-day from younger age to adult age. There are also having some differences between young children's behaviour and that of adults. So, this changes take place in good manner and bad too. Therefore, before reaching on the conclusion, the main differences of social behaviour and its result will b explained in the passage below.
Firstly, when children entered in their younger age, they tend to express themselves much more openly. At this time, they fully express their feelings in which they realised at that time. Hence, some experts says that this changes in the behaviour is good because at this time, parents can understand the situation, which faced by children. In this case, parents will help to their children if children are in trouble situations. According to the survey, in China, 80% youngsters said their feelings with their relatives, at this stage, 95% young children are getting supports from their parents, the reason behind this is only the open-minded social behaviour.
On the other hand, afterwards when young children become adults, they have very volatile relationships. In addition to this, when they are adults they learn to hide their feelings. because of this, parents are giving any types of helps to their children when they face trouble situations. Moreover, at this situation, sometimes adults taken a decision towards their death. The reports of WHO, clearly seen that, in India, suicide rate of adults increased by 10% as compared to the last decade, the reason behind this is only the negative social behaviour of adults. Thus, some people say that this changes are bad.
To conclude this topic, it is quiet obvious that changes in the social behaviour from young children to adults is not always good but sometimes it is also bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45245489416 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7975875437 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366716072599 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141649318357 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868190850234 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273131724317 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814026270401 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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