In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the trend towards eating more fast food is in demand. As a result of this, people are suffering with health problems. Therefore, it requires for government to implement high tax on this type of foods. Thus, I, completely agree with the statement about implementing high tax on fast food.
First of all, people are too much busy in their life. Hence, they are not preparing their today their homes but they are completely depending on the fast food. Moreover, it is available in short times as well as it is much tasty as compared to home prepared foods. In contrast, this types of food are very dangerous for the health. As a result of eating fast foods, major people are suffering from various health diseases because fast food does not contain important nutrients like proteins, vitamins, and other. Consequently, group of people are suffering the common disease "obesity" by eating more fast foods.
On the other side, for reducing the rate of consumption of fast food, it is necessary to introduce high taxes on the junk food. Furthermore, there are so many benefits gain the government in form of money and others. Firstly, effectiveness of the trend towards eating fast food would be reduced because mankind will prepare the healthy food at their home with little cost instead of spending more money on junk foods. Secondly, government would be gained the funds in form of tax and finally, it would increased the economy of the nation. According to the report of the WHO, in UK, after implementing the higher taxes on fast food, 80% of citizens had stopped to buy the fast food and prepared their food at home.
To conclude this topic, it is quiet obvious that effectiveness of the trend towards eating fast food will not completely eliminate by implementing the high tax of government but it will require to organise some awareness programmes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in contrast, in short, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93059936909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70433307656 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492113564669 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2049746193 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356868019803 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130112413733 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596841672337 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229491668403 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512348690255 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.