Children in many places are suffering child abuse What are the effects of it and what can be the solutions to solve the problem

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Children in many places are suffering child abuse . What are the effects of it and what can be the solutions to solve the problem?

It is undeniable that in various regions nowadays, many children are engaged in serious maltreatment. This can have severe effects on those children, which can be eradicated by the governments with ample measures.

To begin with, negative impacts on the young will be seriously inevitable if this problem is not thoroughly mitigated. The most noteworthy issue is stress. Because stress in such early brain development will lead to disruption in mental growth, maltreated children may later indulge themselves in bad behaviors such as smoking and high-risk sexual behaviors. What is of equal seriousness is that the young being abused are more likely not to adequately profit from education. For instance, they have to work so much that they don’t have time and energy for schooling activities, or they have to suffer from other forms of maltreatment such as sexual abuse, so they feel ashamed to continue being with their peers. Studies have proved that children who experienced any form of maltreatment in childhood have a 13% greater likelihood of not graduating from schools.

However, those consequences can be limited to a great extent by the authorities taking various actions. Firstly, laws should be passed to prohibit this crisis. Implementation and enforcement of laws seem to be the strongest remedies in this situation. It helps strengthen the children’s rights because they deserve it, and the abused children and the witnesses can rely on those regulations to accuse the wrongdoings. Secondly, they should provide everyone with full education and life skills approaches. This can help the remote areas’ inhabitants, specifically, be fully equipped with their children’s rights and premature abilities, whereby the young can be treated appropriately to better develop in the future.

In brief, several remedies can be taken to tackle the problems which are certain to arise as the immature are suffering from many kinds of abuse. If people in our community take actions together, there will be a brighter future for children around the globe.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in brief, such as, to begin with, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36503067485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90080430014 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9168558407 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258394264078 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814899748728 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602630036199 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165948860841 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333200762158 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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