Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main effects of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
It is true that although ample major metropolises worldwide have been significantly developing, they still register a rise in rough-sleeping. This leads to manifold consequences to both the homeless and social security, which requires measures to be taken to mitigate those problems.
To begin with, as aforementioned, homelessness can cause damages to many aspects. From the perspective of the rough-sleepers themselves, they may submit to severe mental conditions, especially if they had a wonderful life before. The gap between their former lifestyle and their current one may be so big that they are likely to suffer from depression and other considerable mental issues. Beside that, social security cannot be perfectly guaranteed. As the homeless often do not have adequate required papers, they lose their claims to receive financial aid to afford their living, which, consequently, usually entails crime commitment such as burglary and theft.
However, several measures could be enacted to tackle those matters. Firstly, a simple remedy could be easy access to social security. In other words, the governments should set a framework where it is a human right to have social security, at least to a level that is enough to provide housing, food and other necessities for daily life. Secondly, more homelessness exit programs should be conducted. They encourage both the authorities and sponsors to be engaged in to help the needy soon get back to their normal life. For example, there are many popular humane programs to help those vulnerable individuals in Vietnam such as “Overcome the obstacles” and “Dream houses”.
In brief, various remedies can be taken to eradicate the problems that are certain to arise as homelessness crisis is worsening. If people in our community take actions together, there will be a brighter future for equal global development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for example, in brief, such as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41496598639 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00131860512 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9711024125 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157474129951 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568300805031 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459515365668 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992653898341 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229944700017 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.