Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation What are the primary causes of deforestation To what results may it lead

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Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

Forests are lungs of the Earth, which means they help generate oxygen from carbon dioxide and balance the climatic conditions. However, it is obvious that forests have been cutting down annually for manifold purposes. Some rationales can be put forward to explain this trend which leads to severe impacts on nature.

To begin with, there are two principal reasons why the number of trees is decreasing. The first cause is overpopulation. Since 1800, the population has gone up from 1 billion to 7.8 billion, which entails the significant demands for cutting down trees for living spaces. Besides, agriculture activities also contribute to the decline of forest areas. The growing population needs more and more food to run their lives, so they need more land for cultivation and livestock ranching. According to the Food and Agriculture Organization, agriculture has led to around 80% of deforestation.

The consequences for nature will be seriously inevitable if forests keep falling down giving room for humans’ living. From the perspective of climate, deforestation exacerbates the global warming crisis. It is estimated that loss of forest accounts for around 20 percent of greenhouse gas emission, and merely tropical deforestation annually releases 1.5 billion tons of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. What is of equal seriousness is wildlife extinction. It would be tough for natural inhabitants to survive in the long term as the ecosystem is being severely affected. A study of Brazilian Amazon forecasts that 90 percent of extinctions will occur in the next 40 years.

All in all, causes can be identified for the forest loss, and the serious impacts on nature must not be underestimated. Therefore, we need to take actions to minimize the consequences to bring the brighter future for the next generations.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32413793103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98151259603 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5166691804 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10120809094 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344929076397 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298824829626 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058961303722 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216264242675 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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