Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so Do you agree or disagree to the statement Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay topics:

Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Do you agree or disagree to the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No one can deny the fact that everybody should acknowledge about the household chores so as to be a independent person. In the given scenario, it is perceived whether children should be taught or not to do so whenever they are able to do. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly they should be guide to do the minor household task from their tender age. I feel this way for several reasons whicjh I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.

To commence with, basic skills such as cooking, cleaning, washing and so on are required to be learn since the early age because these are not that hard to do by any small age child. To be more precise, these are the skills they are applicable in life no matter whereever you go otherwise this will create difficulty as you will need help of others. Drawing from my sister experience, she was a pampered child. She even do not know how to make a tea, how to mop floor and so on and when she went abroad this create challenges for her as they always need somebody to assit her. Later, this makes her realize that how imperative it is to learn the basic household task. Therefore, we should initiate to guide our children to do small household task so that they will learn to become self dependent person from the very early age.

Secondly, asigning minor household chores to our children will turn out them to be a responsible man. In addition, they learn to manage things by their own and we do not have to be worried for them. I myself is a compelling evidence of it. I started cooking since my 4th grade and as my parents were job holder, I used to be alone all day long. Nevertheless, I could manage my own things be it preparing food, washing utensils and so on. Furthermore, my morther did not have to stress for me owing to the confidence she had towards me. Even now, I do not need assistance for any tasks at home, I can handle it on my own. Needless to say, as my mother used to teach household chores since my young age, now I have become way more responsible person.

All things considered, unquestionably there are numerous advantages of learning basic skills for children from their tender age. Indeed, this will make them a responsible person and can flourish in life.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... acknowledge about the household chores so as to be a independent person. In the given s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... about the household chores so as to be a independent person. In the given scenar...
^
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'guided'?
Suggestion: guided
...opinion that undoubtedly they should be guide to do the minor household task from the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...nce, she was a pampered child. She even do not know how to make a tea, how to mop ...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...s by their own and we do not have to be worried for them. I myself is a compelling evidence...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...nce my 4th grade and as my parents were job holder, I used to be alone all day long...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, i feel, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48410757946 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54898858265 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498777506112 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8810186589 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275433307228 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852126096807 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801148977479 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170275442176 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110471666759 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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