children today are too dependent on computer and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastime than spending all day indoors.
These days, children spend most of their time watching television or playing games on mobiles and computers. however, it is recommended that they should participate in outdoor activities and go out to play different sports. I completely agree with this view and in this essay I will support my stand with valid examples and arguments.
physical activities are quite essential for the mental and physical development of a child. Multiple medical studies have also proven that mobile games are making children lazy and affecting their overall development. Therefore, parents should encourage their children to play outdoor games like cricket, football, tennis, etc. For instance, according to a study conducted by a child welfare organization 60-70% of childhood health issues like back pain and obesity are caused by sitting in one place for a longer period of time while playing games on mobile and computers. By contrast, when children engage in outdoor activities, their physical strength and stamina increase. games like hockey, cricket and football are team games and teach children team management skills and strategies for thinking.
Thus, it is evident that sports and other physical activities play a significant role in life. For example, a child participating in a game of football will learn to work under pressure and will improve his team skills.
In conclusion, with the advancement of technology, children get easy access to mobiles and computers and get addicted to them. however, for their overall development they should get involved in outdoor sports as it will help them to live a healthy life forever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: Games
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7434961687 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2053314243 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117783479392 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457437535661 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247005400035 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746069417986 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017795430997 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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