Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a school of thought that children nowadays are extremely dependent on smartphones, computers as well as every types of electronic entertainment. Its impact on their eyes and the level of healthy brings much controversial debate with regard to the parent's thinking of getting a plan for them to take part in more traditional pastimes and sports. This essay will elaborate both positive and negative sides of these arguments from a cultural perspective.
Providing the time-table based on the advantage sides of playing soccer, table tennis or other kinds of those on a daily basis is undisputedly one of the main arrow for making a good body's system for their sons when they were a child. The first reason to support it is that despite the kinds of leaving them in a house were especially important for guarding offspring from the disadvantage components in society, no one can ensure that it would not get other forms of harmful phenomenon such as autism spectrum disorder or addicted game. Moreover, one particular salient example for these conceptions is an article having been published by the New York Time Magazine indicated that 95% of students who hang out with their soul-mates on a regular basis, could have more and more motivation of loving this life as well as a perfect condition of their healthy from sporting gymnastic activities with friends. Therefore, according to all of these aforementioned reasons, the idea of preparing the ways for offspring to interact with social activities is quite significant.
On the other hand, adult people should also have some imagination of negative abilities which would lead the child to be addicted with bad behaviours or get violence from social atmosphere. To illustrate, we can see from a thousand of students in Japan, a country which is infamous for school violence, are rejecting educational environment and leaving indoors with no opportunity of interacting with human beings, especially in their school which gave them a great amount of scary things. Furthermore, the percentage of children who addicted with heroin, marijuana or other types of those stimulant in the world today is one of the best instance for parents who prefer their sons to take part in outside gymnastics. It stands to the reason that preparing an outside activity for children was not probably positive at all based on many bad components around society at present.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that the mission of providing the traditional pastimes regularly for child is greatly important, the protection to plump the abilities of obtaining vice could also be value considerably.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13225058005 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8673176377 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547563805104 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0705342131 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.333333333 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.9166666667 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237261627641 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834344782609 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039354396004 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143657318424 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405570623428 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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