Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution. Do you agree?
As the century draws to the close, environmental concern such as climate change has become of paramount importance. Although we have ample documentation about the extent and significance of these problems, this realisation has not yet dawned on most of our political leaders. Therein, a paradigm shift in political action can lead to profound changes over the causes of these problems.
most of the ecological woes are systemic, which means they are interdependent and interlinked. For instance, stabilising climate change will only be possible when pollution is reduced worldwide. it is pollution which causes global warming which in turn destabilise the environmental temperature and precipitation rates which as a whole contributes to climate change.
The demand for more and more products in the market implies to the massive scale depletion of resources. If more resources are required, the level of deforestation, soil erosion and so on can go up. Not only consumerism cause an immense demand on the nature but it also puts the future generation in a crisis of lack of natural products.
In my opinion, to control climate change a sustainable approach has to be adopted, to ensure a balance over consumerism and all other global concerns. it is, therefore, important that the government bodies should implement a scrutinised approach towards the issues of pollution and excessive consumerism.
so, it can be concluded that a political transition to a new paradigm which follows the norms of strict environmental ethics can refrain the biosphere from degradation. Furthermore, sustainable development can satisfy the current societies needs without diminishing the prospects of future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57794676806 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20601095869 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6444030095 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146266047971 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457699789177 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417934870647 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715358214879 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045491719848 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.