Most countries improving their economy by focusing in the manufacturing however, government most the time support this kind of investment and give a lot of facility to attract investors.
Initially, there are many advantages for building a factory in our community. However, every residential area close to the factory will have a lot of chances to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city income will increase and that will open the way for many new investment and open many opportunities for local residential. Also, it will be a lot of great jobs for our community and that will decrease the rate of the unemployment. Furthermore, it will be a change in our social community cause the movement of the people back and forth to the factory. More than that, some factories give support for the student to be able to applied their carer before graduate from college. In many ways having a factory in our community will open the door for all the community .
Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will come many heavy tracks also, it will be a lot of people from different places. Opening a new factory will affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it will be a lot of health problems specially if this company will throw the factory wast in the sea or bury them in the earth.
In my conclusion, I think opening a factory in our community will be a great chance that can help us to build a cohesive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to improve the infrastructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live....
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ructure and make a greet development in many aspect in our live. For instances, the city in...
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Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...will open the door for all the community . Moreover, we have many advantage fo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... open the door for all the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for ope...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...l the community . Moreover, we have many advantage for opening a factory in our community ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
...ommunity but in the other hand, we have many disadvantage however, opening factory will make a lo...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun traffic seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much traffic', 'a good deal of traffic'.
Suggestion: much traffic; a good deal of traffic
...l make a lot of issues like, it will be many traffic and it will come many heavy tracks als...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...affic and it will come many heavy tracks also, it will be a lot of people from di...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l affect our environment and it will be a enormous environment pollution and it w...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elevate'
Suggestion: elevate
...rmous environment pollution and it will elevated the temperature. In the same way it wil...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure. In the same way it will be a lot of health problems specially if this compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67320261438 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77048804098 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467320261438 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7315213714 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113469582024 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063338751871 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536434410249 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765921567625 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209487732358 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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