Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
You should write at least 250 words.
This is globalization world. People wishes and desire change rapidly. Some thoughts are negatives and some are positive after all it all count success of human life.
As we discuss on topic about competitiveness. In my point of view it is positive quality for human being. Because of this competitive world, everyone has to be perfect and successful in their life. Competitiveness is such kind of attitude which helps to identify the goals and target of personal life. It determines the goals of individuals and help to achieve those goals. However, sometimes competitiveness made people more greedy and selfish.
Everything has there negative and positive side, as we thought hard working attitude is Wright for human but it has some negative vibes as well. When people want more and more he/she will forget about their social and moral life. They always thought about their career, money and success. Social life has been dies they forget about their family, friends and relatives as well. On the other hand comprising between negative and positive effectiveness we can say that good thought bring positive things so it is also useful in following topic too. Without setting goal and target in life, life is nothing. So competitiveness is very necessary for individual.
As a conclusion, each and every things has there negative and positive side. If we made competitiveness as our strength and doing hard work on our goals it will be our success path. But if we do not use our capacity as a popper way then we are in trouble. So we should think positive, do positive then definitely the result will be positive as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, after all, as to, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95620437956 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76176832317 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8131071372 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211922275053 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065656076197 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567396391662 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133001538214 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343668769278 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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