Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the last century, our life has been invaded by different types of machinery. Which invention has definitely changed our life? If we analyzed in a finer level of details the effects of the computer in our life we would conclude that they modeled forever our existence.
The business machine developed and took to the next stage the way individuals interact. The phone, respectively the mobile phone, was a shifting moment for our civilization but computers make it possible to look at with our own eyes the moon surface fulfilling an ancestral humanity dream. Moreover, using revolutionizing programs like Skype of social media environments people are in contact with any person who possesses a personal computer.
Using the brain of the PC for another device to enhance their functions make computers to be the most important invention of all. The introduction, in the aviation field, of artificial intelligence, has improved the flight security and this advertised leading to becoming the first choice of travel. Furthermore, not only makes the machines easier to use but reduces human involvement increasing the production of the industry as an example.
Anti-artificial intelligence supporters claim computers are not reliable and safe being vulnerable to viruses which convert them into boxes with no purpose. However, this suggestion is questionable for two reasons. First, any invention has his downturn but the planners work every day to improve the qualities of products. Secondly, the sprawl of the application in which the computers are involved attracts large founds and humans effort to reduce the effects of viruses.
To summarize, or live without a personal computer could not be imagined. If we lost any contact with convenience offered by the technology we would be in danger to disappear as a species
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ention has definitely changed our life? If we analyzed in a finer level of details...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27147766323 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98315832538 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8919054783 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142229229274 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451270217744 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342056198219 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754835906676 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222846816914 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.