Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement? What can be done to protect them.
Recent dacades have witnessed an increase in commercials from many competing companies, attacting a great deal of media attention. Although I think these advertisements would lead to some adverse impacts on consumers, It is not without solutions.
There are a great number of positive effects that advertisements have on people. First, In order to generate brand recognition, some companies have a propensity to exaggerate the quality of their products. This means that Consumers would be susceptible to these false portrayals and spend money purchasing them, which is actually just a waste of money.Second, An increase in negative commercials acts as an incentive for harmful and unhealthy habits. For example, An constant exposure to convenience food advertisements could contribute to a higher degree of consumption in adolescents, which could culminate in some food-borne diseases.
However, the official authorities should undertake some practical initiatives to alleviate this problem. The first measure is that the legislation of imposing heavy fine on negative commercials on the mainstream media should be enforced. This would act as a deterrent to the advertisement producers, forcing them to think twice about broadcasting them. In addition, the government should intensify higher level of censorship on commercials promoting harmful products. This would remarkably contribute to a rise in the numbers of positive advertisements, helping consumers to buy better products.
In conclusion, I believe that commercials would have a negative influence on consumers in terms of purchasing powers and harmful habits. The legislation of heavy fine and better censorship should be corporated to eradicate this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77647058824 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29193671968 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2623056274 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176609926714 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623182978274 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468691733529 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111734315842 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210563891748 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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