Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Recently, more and more advertisements are posted by opposing corporates on social area such as websites, pedestrian streets as well as commercial complex. While some people consider it as a common methods for advertising firms to extend their business, I believe that it has deep impact on purchasers by unconsciously changing their choices.
There are several reasons why I think ads have great effects on costumers. Firstly, consumers may be difficult to find out the products they want to buy from plenty of advertisements. In other words, To conduct propaganda in this way is a total waste of customers’ time. Secondly, these ads probably exaggerate the function of their commodities and even convey fake information, because these companies are eager to make their products more attractive. Finally, the qualities of productions would improve if the advertisers cut down the advertising expense and increased the cost of producing.
Therefore, a set of actions should be taken to prevent purchasers from these annoying advertisements. In my opinion, the change must be start with managers of contending companies who need to pay more attention to the quality of their products rather than the advertisements. Furthermore, the government can also play a pivotal role in making this situation much better. For instance, they are able to introduce several relevant policies for limiting advertisers’ behaviour to disturb consumers. In this way, customers can be well-protected.
In conclusion, no one can turn a blind eye to the annoying advertisements which purchasers will continue to bear with, unless the corporations and government set clear rules to handle it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49425287356 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30319310479 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7316786732 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3846153846 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168302412909 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561629483428 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390680020964 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094773558071 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024046832525 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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