Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Many consumers are bombarded with large advertisements provided by many businesses daily in this modern society due to the development of media and press such as tv commercial, the Internet, and newspaper. I believe that ads have negative impacts on human life significantly and therefore, governments need to take some actions to deal with this issue.
While it is true that many customers could get informed about newly released items or products easily created by enterprises, there are unwanted adverse effects of ads on consumers severely. They are often exposed to obtain false and exaggerated information about objects or services via ads. This is because many businesses do not concern whether the products are practical and useful enough or not; instead through the fascinating and appealing advertisements, which cause attract consumer's attention and encourage them to purchase the goods, they want to increase the companies' profit only.
However, governments can support the customers to have some reasonable consumption through advertisements by implementing some laws. Firstly, if there are some businesses continue to deliver false information or invalid features on products on ads, they can impose a high penalty on those companies so that the public could escape from wrong consumption. Also, as they provide customers with some campaigns associated with rational spending patterns against frothy ads, people might protect themselves from unnecessary or unuseful expenditures.
In conclusion, consumers are confronted with considerable detrimental influences of advertisements these days. However, governments' possible actions such as several campaigns could tackle this phenomenon practically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88259109312 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2018430497 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655870445344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1653846002 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23614806409 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083756808555 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406636761111 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137980918989 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353491487158 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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