The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

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The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

It is true that the excessive exploitation of world’s resources such as oil, and water has been rising at an alarming rate in recent years. While there are various reasons behind this phenomenon, several effective measures should be adopted to solve the problem.

There are two principal reasons why human beings are overexploiting natural resources. Firstly, as the world has been highly competitive, all nations, especially developed countries, have been making sacrifice invaluable resources to gain the supreme positions in terms of finance and avoid the financial dependence on other nations. China, for example, have consumed excessively natural resources such as wood, oil, and water so that they could become one of the most powerfully wealthy nations, regardless of catastrophic impacts they exert on nature including natural resource exhaustion and severely environmental depletion. Secondly, finacial shortage is also the main culprit for this trend because if the water treatment systems are installed or renewable resources are applied such as energy generating from solar panels or wind turbines, then the host countries would have to pay a great deal of money on these eco-friendly methods. For instance, in the underpeveloped nations such as Sierra Leone, where basic needs including shelter, food, and health are still the top priorities of national government, they would continue exploiting world’s resources to save money for other pressing problems.

Approaches, therefore, should be taken to cope with this globally serious problems on the global scale. One possible measure is that government officials should insitute international policies which could promote mutual understading among nations throughout the world so that they will not compete in either economic or military aspect. Thanks to introducing these policies, national budget could divert to renewable energy. Another feasible approach is by increasing the humanitarian aid, which use for improving infrastructure, as well as shaking off poverty in underdeveloped world. By adopting this method, not only could it strengthen international relations, but it also opens up more opportunities for ricipient countries to access to the cutting-edge eco-friendly technology, which have contributed tremendously to environmental conservation.

In conclusion, world natural resources has been overexploiting unprecedentedly, solutions, therefore, should be adopted as soon as possible to alleviate this serious problem.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90410958904 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16592383791 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624657534247 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2141650937 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.769230769 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156589607351 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055589097235 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765735779113 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107291299578 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064045075699 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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