Since the world's population and their demand and consumption are soaring at an alarming pace, natural resources such as water and oil are diminishing rapidly. This essay will argue some feasible rationales given the resource depletion crisis and suggest some practical and effective solutions.
No doubt, we live in a world that the population is increasing day by day. The more humans on the planet, the more resources will require to meet their needs. Furthermore, the number of vehicles and firms, producer companies have surpassed the human population, which means more and more energy sources such as oil and electricity following natural resources such as water are depleting. Meanwhile, household consumptions are one of the main culprits behind resource depletion, and some immediate operations must take action to tackle this dangerous and warning dilemma.
On the other hand, some overwhelming moves by governments, authorities, and people themselves can address the problem to a certain extent. The first and for most resolution is renewable energy replace by non-renewable and fossil energy, such as oil and gas. These alternative energies not only will put an end to the source depletion, but they also are in the environmental advantages. It will resolve several environmental issues, global warming as the most crucial one, effectively. So, authorities should dedicate a considerable budget to these procedures improvements. Besides, people's awareness and consciousness should raise regarding this ever-approaching crisis and educate how to deal with this problem by understanding the optimum and financially consumption methods. Now is the time for humans to cut their unnecessary usages if they still want to save the world for their prospective generations.
In conclusion, although the Earth, our home planet, is confronting a severe reduction in its resources due to humans' insatiable demands and consumptions, some practical functions and priorities must undertake by governments and households immediately and effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
Since the worlds population and their demand and consump...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
...planet, the more resources will require to meet their needs. Furthermore, the number of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, still, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65584415584 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17754152026 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62012987013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2253269315 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169895435173 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522212571583 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635313994726 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106259467199 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732425569923 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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