Despite the fact that the majority of people informed about the importance of the environment, a minority of them care about its preservation and maintenance. This essay will examine the potential rationales of such a tendency and propose some suggestions to encourage and motivate more and more individuals to conserve the only pale blue dot, Earth.
On the other hand, there are a number of factors that people, wanting or unwanting, participate less and less in the protection of their environment. There is no doubt that private vehicles have made human life much convenient and time-saving by way of illustration. So, people strive harder and work more to gain the opportunity to own a car. However, there is nothing more widespread than the news on the fossil-fuel-consumer vehicles' detrimental influences as the main culprit behind global warming, concluding the emission and radiation of a huge volume of greenhouse gases and exhausting fumes. Furthermore, nowadays, societies alter communities with materialism and consumerism attitudes. It means most of the people tend to purchase staff that even do not need, or throw the old goods away instead of any possible renovation concerning to mass-production.
In contrast, thanks to initial human awareness, some procedures and measures can be undertaken to make them more conscious and better environmental maintainers. First of all, government and authority should dedicate more budget to effective education systems and media to increase people's consideration of that today's overpopulation, and over-consuming will directly affect the future generation's life-quality and welfare, as a result of land shortage and resource depletion. Besides, more practical rules for single-occupied vehicle ownership and more strict regulations and restriction on controlling traffic and its deteriorated consequences should be enacted. Last but not least, more and more investigations and expenditures should be spent on renewable energy; thus, it would become the dominant source of energy.
To conclude, although most people are acquainted with the vital role of the environment in human lives, some reasons can be accounted for by their environmental protection ignorance. Fortunately, there are still some resolutions for rising humans' motivation, as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... increase peoples consideration of that todays overpopulation, and over-consuming will...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...e are still some resolutions for rising humans motivation, as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66954022989 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3388714893 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2012821661 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.928571429 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168736903248 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512662967362 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577222008946 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106756298294 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640945022907 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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