Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
One interesting phenomeno nowadays is that the differences between nations are less than past due to customers from different countries have the chance to buy products that are similar all over the world. In my opinion, this may be a positive trend.
To begin with, what makes the people from a variety of countrie easy to communicate with each other is that the similarity between them, like eaten food, dresses, and daily equipments. For example, a man from Italia can use a computer easily and conveniently in China as the laptaps have the same construtions and fanctions. Addtionally, there will be less misunderstanding between governments and individuals from different countries when their citizens share the same shopping habits and pursume simmliar goods. Therefore, the whole world is sure to be more peaceful, that is to say the opportunities of wars will be decreased as the result of the dissappearing gaps among nations.
Those, who suppose that it will be a negative development when countries are getting similar than before, believe that it will destroy a country's distinguished and stylish culture. However, a nation can not lose its uniqual and independent features as though persons use the same products, and the reason is that the cultural habits and living lifestyle will not be simply changed. For example, a Japanese woman will dress on the traditional customs after an international meeting when she has to put on formal western suits. What is more, a Chinese student is not willing to forget his mother language even though he often order American fast food, because the language is deeply vertured in his mind, and it is the language that makes a country's culture and political status independent.
In conclusion, people with a variety of nationalities could communicate with each other easily and the misunderstanding between different countries will drop down when nations share more similarities. And a nation will not lose its own culture and be the same as another country in terms of living style and language even though their citizens may use the same mobile phones and clothes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'orders'.
Suggestion: orders
...is mother language even though he often order American fast food, because the languag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, what is more, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1387283237 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88220288226 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.789557138 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189404342471 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685510524196 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363139821119 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121611407592 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187531303015 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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